Lightning Dawn Re-Designed

If WH:40k or a Song of Fire and Ice was rejected for having a half-witted, dark for no reason plot, then My Brave Pony would be the result. I can't sympathize with Lightning Dawn and his cohorts, I would never do a fan-art of him, but seeing how Legend Bringer, Scipio Smith and Senior Cornholio turned this Nazi, Sexist, Fascist pig into a human being. I gradually started liking him when the moments came, and he realized how mortal he is in the real world, and not some childish elitist fantasy.

 

This is Lightning Dawn pre-character development, with a smug grin on his face. Oh Purple you inspire me, to be honest I still hate Lightning Dawn, I didn't make this special and draw backgrounds because it feels like a chore, not something I'd enjoy, I keep imagining some poorly done dystopian fiction designs.

I still suck at proportions people, so you can go tell me where I went wrong. 

By the way, the Unicornicopian's numbering system makes no sense to me, since there's no reason for it, it has nothing to do with their finances or social security, basically their names are their label, which can either mean it represents that they are in fact manufacturing codes or a license plate tattooed onto them. You know, I really wish Lightning Dawn's phallic horn wasn't part of the design.

Incidentally, I lazily unbanned Mykan in order to get the references of his cast, I now recognized Google could have done the job, because DA has spoken and I can't ban him until 48 hours has passed. So if your seeing this Mykan say your piece, I can't stop you from stalking me anyway.